How does my Korean pronunciation sound?

Question

Hello! I've been putting a lot of effort into improving my Korean pronunciation lately. Could Korean speakers evaluate my pronunciation on a scale of 1 to 10? Also, if there are areas for improvement, I would appreciate your advice.

[Listen to pronunciation sample](https://voca.ro/1gUNK07BGZI2)

I am studying Korean while living in Gangnam, and I really feel that pronunciation is very important. Especially when talking to people in places like Gangnam or Itaewon, I want to speak more naturally. I would be grateful if you could let me know what aspects I should pay attention to!